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Conclusion by ThefortyfifthWord Conclusion by ThefortyfifthWord
Well this it the finished story to the silly light bulb man, not really a story more of an event.
I'm very pleased with this one, it took me a lot of time to fit all of the shards in the right place, but sooooooo worth it.
All resources used are my own.

I would really appreciate some Critiques, i would love to try to make this as good as i can.
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Given 2013-01-20
Conclusion by ~ThefortyfifthWord ( Suggested by HippieHippo and Featured by Aeirmid )
:iconthebluebus:
Wow indeed! That's a really good idea, and I think you executed it / yourself pretty perfect.
There's only three things I can find which are maybe not perfect - not that I could really do them any better, but maybe you can. :)
- The hammer is pretty huge. This might be intentional to a degree, to make it immediately recognizable, but it looks slightly odd.
- The one shard that is right at the hammers head, I _think_ it might look better if it was in front of the movement blur?
- the front of the figure looks a bit odd, there's his shirt, but i don't know, would a jacket naturally fall that way?
These are all just minor points, however. All in all this is really really good! :)
What do you think?
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13 out of 14 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconuglybug:
I absolutely love this! The concept is wonderfully original and the attention to detail is perfect. The simple clothing helps us to concentrate on the impact of the image itself while the little motion lines around the hands and hammer make this all the more realistic. I do agree with previous suggestions that the hammer looks slightly too big but in a way this enables the concept to stand out more. The light seems to fall perfectly on the pieces of broken glass - it is almost as if we are seeing the action as it happens. This is a really great image!
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82 out of 83 deviants thought this was fair.

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:iconvoodoo-velvet:
Voodoo-Velvet Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2015  Professional General Artist
Awesome work!!!!! You really captured a feeling I get sometime when I'm working...or talking. =)
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:iconsaimgraphics:
SaimGraphics Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Idea & Composition both superb!
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:iconwilliam-carroll:
William-Carroll Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014
magic
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:iconnesekavak:
nesekavak Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
impressive
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:iconiskander1989:
Iskander1989 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice one!
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:iconbiga-nt:
BigA-nt Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fantastic! Really well done. Congrats! :D
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:iconnovus41:
novus41 Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
great work
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:icondrotk:
Drotk Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014
i like this one. is it the moment of realizing your idea into life or...
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:iconjrseals:
jrseals Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh damn. That gotta hoit.
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:iconconfuzzledmia:
confuzzledMia Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013
very nice idea! :heart:
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:icontasiaraye:
tasiaraye Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
very nice i love this
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:iconliechi-chan:
Liechi-Chan Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love this so much :3
Its so unique and a great photo!
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:iconbluerosesharpthorn:
bluerosesharpthorn Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like the concept behind this, it seems almost simultaneously funny and sad! Great work! :heart:
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:iconandsunshine:
andsunshine Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Congratulations! This piece has been chosen to represent Top-Quality's best in the Featured gallery! Come by and check it out, along with the other Featured pieces.
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:iconandyserrano:
AndySerrano Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Your wonderful art work has been featured in my January [link] 2013 Journal.
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:iconlegendaryjd:
LegendaryJD Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love the concept.
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:iconprometheuscz:
PrometheusCZ Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
Best
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:iconjoeltonongkh:
joeltonongkh Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
Smashing own ideas haha...I do know what you feel. Could it be more nice if there is a bit more fragment flying (blur effect) in front to create depth of field?
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:iconambitiondfined:
AmbitionDFined Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Professional General Artist
oh ho, man. i can relate, i think. i can RELATE. haha. SUPERFAVE!
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:iconashimbabbar:
ashimbabbar Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
evil world, farewell ! May I find an eternity of light…
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:iconxskillerx:
xSkillerx Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Fucking awesome! :peace:
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:icondarkjade21:
DarkJade21 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Very creative concept.
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:iconartbit:
ArtBIT Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have no idea...
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:icontrue2koinu:
True2Koinu Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
love this <3
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:iconwadecreativesuite:
WadeCreativeSuite Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Professional Photographer
nice
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:iconkwajchick:
kwajchick Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Honestly, I have never seen something so amazing before in my entire life. The creativity put into this work is simply astounding. It stood out from all of the daily deviations today. Keep up the great work! :3
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:iconralife:
RAlife Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
nicely done... not too sure about the hammer choice....
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:iconskylordzuleano:
SkylordZuleano Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's a bluidy suicide!
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:iconnailsin:
nailsin Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Conclusion? More like concussion.
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:iconexoticcarspotter:
ExoticCarSpotter Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This is beautiful. I love the size of the hammer. Lighting and evverything is perfect. Excellent job.
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:iconimaginary-ang3l:
imaginary-ang3l Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is amazing, I had to take a second look as I was scrolling through different DDs. The concept is really interesting and it comes across really well, but what is this story of the light bulb man that you speak of?
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:icononsoulthelosthelgast:
OnsoulTheLostHelgast Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student General Artist
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Again
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:iconkakasakuobessive:
KakaSakuObessive Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like the concept and the flawless execution of it all. It strikes me as some form of suicide, but the surreal edge to it just makes it a unique and magnificent piece.
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:iconniji-jagaimo:
Niji-Jagaimo Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OH GOSH THAT LIGHT BULB MAN ART THING IS DAMN SEXY AS HELL! WHY AM I USING CAPS!? Ah that's better :) I really like it though, it's like he just want's to end everything, looks like he was going crazy with every idea swirlin around in his bulb-head! heehee
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:iconmyn-anthony:
Myn-Anthony Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I see a lot of comments saying how this is funny...but honestly, my first thought was, "Poor Light Bulb Man...:worry:"

I guess it could be because I've been depressed lately. Maybe the viewer just imposes whatever they're already feeling onto the art a bit. I saw this as...he just can't take it anymore, and bashed his own face in. Everyone else is laughing at it. I must be in a dark place. :P

Anyway, it's awesome! Very well done. :D
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:iconsonatoz:
SONATOZ Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist
do you like the band named EMERY ???
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:iconshadrico200:
Shadrico200 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I guess he wasn't feeling to "Bright"

Good art though :D
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:iconenigmaticaunlocked:
EnigmaticaUnlocked Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
Outstanding creativity, and great execution.
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:iconginger13ninja:
ginger13ninja Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This is amazing I can't think of anything that could make this look better!!!
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:iconmadwarf:
madwarf Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
i understand this pain
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:iconrazgriz-3:
Razgriz-3 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
We all feel like this sometimes.
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:iconfrosen24:
fROSEn24 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
oh wow this is very very unique
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:iconsantipassera:
SantiPassera Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
the human only builds and destroys.. lol it just mind me
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:iconcheshc:
CheshC Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is truly brilliant, I love it. On a side note, would it be okay for me to put on a shirt? It'd be a one off, no sales or anything, just a shirt for me. :P Anyways, excellent work. :D
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:icongavacho13:
gavacho13 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great image! Sometimes I feel like doing this to my own skull :)
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:icondreamer-of-magic:
Dreamer-of-Magic Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013   General Artist
interesting and unique concept. this seems equivalent to killing yourself with a gun to your head...

:noes: why are you suicidal light bulb man :(

congrats on the DD :clap:
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:iconsufferzoep:
sufferzoep Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
isn't this already your second DD? congratulations!
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:icontlbklaus:
TLBKlaus Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sweet!
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:icondomalom:
Domalom Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Love the concept, perfectly executed. A well deserved DD :+fav:
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:icongamefreakzone:
GameFreakZone Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
*Light bulb lights up on top of my head*

You gave me a really good idea with this photo! Too bad it won't come to fruition since i do not have a HD video recorder, or any sort of device that captures videos. =(
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